Language Arts Reflection

By:Alexis Maren 6-P

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To write a good advertising essay, you can use the successful paragraph method that will help you with your sentence variety. You should also have a topic sentence for each paragraph. That will make your reader interested to read that paragraph.

When ever you state an opinion, you have to have an argument. In other words you have to give proof of your opinion. The one thing I am proud of that I did in my piece is that I used the information that I knew to give people tips on how to avoid getting tricked into advertising. I think I really put my opinion on what I think about advertising.

The one thing I think I could have improved on is my editing. A lot words that were not suppose to be capitalized were capitalized or just didn’t need to be. Now after I write an essay or a regular story, I really edit carefully. This essay made me more aware of advertising and how to dodge those tricky advertisers, but most of all; I think I really progressed in my writing this year. Thanks Mrs. Bubalis!!!

I picked this essay because I think I did a really good job on how to describe the ways to dodge tricky advertisers.